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Words Hurt


Hit me one more time
Hit me again
Push me around
On the floor
Down the stairs
It hurts less than your words
So kick me
Bruise my skin
But don’t call me names
‘Worthless, ugly’
It causes too much pain
I love you I really do
I’ll take the abuse
And be your punch bag
But please keep your words
My head can’t take it
My mind won’t survive
The truth....
It destroys me.
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demonrobber Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
That is quite brutal and savage. Physical abuse is so distressing but words can sting even more. People find it hard to walk away from a relationship despite the abuse. It is all quite sad. A powerful, emotional piece of verse. Well done.
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gothss123 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
Thank you very much :heart:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Professional Writer
:huggle:
Words do hurt more than the actually action. Some wounds from words never heal.
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gothss123 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
yes the other day my dad said he wanted nothing to do with me and life is better without me there. i dont really like him for what he put me through but... it still hurt especially cuz he's my dad :'(
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k9lover64 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm sorry to hear. ): I hope things improve in your future. (:
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gothss123 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
dont be things are much better now, thanks though :)
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k9lover64 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, good to hear (:
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GABanks118 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Writer
This basically describes my experience with elementary and middle school.
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gothss123 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
elementary and middle school aren't the nicest place for people who are considered different, like me :L
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is powerfull and well written... words can hurt you in so many ways, they can rip your soul apart there for words are far more painful then actions in the end.. well done
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